You have given me the most beautiful compliment. Thank you so much. Devotion form a warrior is indeed divine. Loyal, passionate and honourable. May this love find us all ❤️
it's been awhile. I am glad to read such an outstanding poem. But of course! Though I was referring to the entire poem when I used the word "outstanding," I think the four lines I quoted are exceptional. This is really beautiful work!
I love how the poetry seamlessly entwines with the story - it allows her to exist simultaneously as a formidable, almost cruel force and as the beloved at the heart of it all.
Mirage, I was literally telling my family about your work. You write with so much depth and passion very single topic hits me hard in the chest. So thank you. It means so much to me.
this...leviathan....and why would she destroy such a magnificent creature or that .......no words kind of care. You brought me to the legends i studied and loved with my whole being....thank you
With devotion like his… I hope not 😩Though he would willingly lay his life in her hands 😉. Thank you so much WritingWithWater for reading and taking the time to comment… I love that we share a passion for the old legends. 🖤
What a powerful piece! I love this ❤️🔥
Thank you 🙏
You're such a beautiful storyteller, wow 😍😍 👏 ✨️💖💖👑
Thank you Zia. Thanks for the encouragement I really wasn’t sure until we spoke. Appreciate you so much ❤️
Likewise 💖🫂
This is so beautifully written. Devotion from a warrior is the embodiment of divinity. Masterful work. Thank you for sharing 💞
You have given me the most beautiful compliment. Thank you so much. Devotion form a warrior is indeed divine. Loyal, passionate and honourable. May this love find us all ❤️
🙏🏻🙏🏻
He is the ocean’s gentle rhythm,
yet still he makes tides roar,
consumes entire empires
then kneels beside her shore.
Hi Regolith!
it's been awhile. I am glad to read such an outstanding poem. But of course! Though I was referring to the entire poem when I used the word "outstanding," I think the four lines I quoted are exceptional. This is really beautiful work!
Thank you so much my wonderful friend! Always appreciate your support. Hope all is well 🖤
Wow I love the grandiose energy you build and build and earn that last line hits like a proper smirk
Thank you so much for reading Gub! 🥰🖤
I love how the poetry seamlessly entwines with the story - it allows her to exist simultaneously as a formidable, almost cruel force and as the beloved at the heart of it all.
Jeanne, thank you for reading. Devotional love can be all consuming and I’m so glad you felt the weight of this type of surrender.
Thank you for your comment 🖤
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So beautiful.💗
🥹 Thank you so much for reading 💖
I love how your words carry me through time... mesmerising work ✨️
Mirage, I was literally telling my family about your work. You write with so much depth and passion very single topic hits me hard in the chest. So thank you. It means so much to me.
Thank you 🫶🏼
this...leviathan....and why would she destroy such a magnificent creature or that .......no words kind of care. You brought me to the legends i studied and loved with my whole being....thank you
With devotion like his… I hope not 😩Though he would willingly lay his life in her hands 😉. Thank you so much WritingWithWater for reading and taking the time to comment… I love that we share a passion for the old legends. 🖤
Incredible poetry. I'm glad to see something new from you and really enjoyed liked this one on devotion. Excellent.
Thanks Gary. It’s been a while 😩 I have so many unfinished bits just needed a push. Thank you for reading Gary. 🖤
Ah, looking forward to reading more as and when you get to finishing them 😀
I need to get a move on with that 😂 🖤
God I missed your poetry. I love this Regolith!! 🥹😭❤️
My beautiful beautiful friend…I love to see your name pop up…I missed you too ❤️
😭❤️ you staying now?
Maybe. Probably. But part time 😂
Devotion
Absolute devotion and nothing less.
💯…nothing less ☺️
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